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Cautiously Optimistic by Britney Nguyen & JJ Llorin - 2026 Romance Writing Competition 3rd Place Winner

  • Writer: Creative Writing Committee
    Creative Writing Committee
  • Feb 27
  • 1 min read

Cautiously Optimistic by Britney Nguyen & JJ Llorin


Call me pathetic,

The way I crave for your attention.

Your energy is so magnetic,

Do you feel our connection?


We fit together like a puzzle piece,

Composing a melody from our laughter.

A sweet, gentle release,

Anticipation for our next chapter.


Standing at a crossroad of indecision,

A dance with the devil on my shoulder.

Is this something you could envision?

Do you see us getting older?


Though the walls around my heart get tighter,

You still find your way under my skin.

Through the dark, every step feels lighter,

Unlocking the love I’ve kept within.


I wouldn’t mind falling in deep,

If you decide to take the leap.


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